分享两篇美国留学Essay范例！

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范例1

My most important experience sought me out. It happene to me; I in't cause it.
My preferre companions are books or music or pen an paper. I have only a small circle of close friens, few of whom get along together. They coul easily be counte "misfits." To be plain, I foun it quite easy to oubt my ability to have any sort of "close relationship."
After the closing festivities of Anover Summer School this past summer, on the night before we were scheule to leave, a girl I ha met uring the program's course approache me. She came to my room an sat own on my be an announce that she was ebating with herself whether she wante me to become her boyfrien. She wante my reaction, my opinion.
I was startle, to say the least, an frightene. I instantly sai, "No." I tol her I on no account wante this an that I woul reject any gestures she mae towars starting a relationship. I woul ignore her entirely, if nee be. I explaine that I was a cowar. I wante nothing whatsoever to o with a relationship. I talke a lot an very fast.
To my surprise, she i not leave instantly. Instea, she hugge her knees an rocke back an forth on my be. I watche her from across the room. She rocke, an I watche. Doubts crept up on me. Opportunity ha knocke an the oor was still locke. It might soon epart.
"I lie," I sai. "I was afrai of what might happen if we became involve. But it's better to take the chance than to be afrai."
She tol me she knew I ha lie. I ha mae her realize, though, how much she actually wante me to be her boyfrien. We ecie to keep up a relationship after Anover.
Even then, I was not sure which ha been the lie. Now I think that everything I sai may have been true when I sai it. But I'm still not sure.
I learne, that night, that I coul be close to someone. I also realize, now, that it oesn't matter whether or not that person is a misfit; the only important thing is the feeling, the closeness, the connection.
As long as there is something between two people — frienship, love, share interests, whatever else — it is a sign that there can be some reconciliation with fear, some "fit" for misfits. An it shows that fear nee not always win, that we can grow an change, an even have secon chances.
I am still seeing her.

范例2

From the time I was able to realize what a university was, all I hear from my mother's sie of the family was about the University of Michigan an the great heritage it has.
Many a Saturay afternoon my granfather woul evote to me, by sitting me own in front of the television an reminiscing about the University of Michigan while halftime occurre uring a Michigan Wolverines football game.
Later, as I grew oler an universities took on greater meaning, my mother an uncle, both alumni of the University of Michigan, took me to see their ol stamping grouns. From first sight, the university looke frightening because of its size, but with such a large school comes iversity of people an of acaemic an non-acaemic events.
In Springfiel High School, non-acaemic clubs such as the Future Physicians an the Pylon, both of which I have belonge to for two years, give me an opportunity to see both the business worl an the meical worl. These two clubs have given me a greater sense of what these careers may be like. In Future Physicians, I participate in fiel trips to chilren's hospitals an also participate in two bloo banks.
Currently I hol a job at Maas Brothers. This lets me interact with people outsie my own immeiate environment. I meet ifferent kins of people, in iffrent moos, with ifferent attitues, an with ifferent values. This job teaches me to be patient with people, to have responsibility, an to appreciate people for what they are.
In the community I am active in my church Youth Group. As a high school sophomore, I was our church's representative to the Diocesan Youth Fellowship. I helpe organize youth group events, the largest being "The Bishop's Ball," a state-wie event for 300 young people. I also playe high school junior varsity soccer for two years.
As a senior I will be playing varsity soccer, but in the off-season. As a junior I coache a girls' soccer team for the town. This gave me a great eal of responsibility because the care of twenty-four girls was put into my custoy. It felt very satisfying to pass on the knowlege of soccer to another generation. The girls playe teams from other parts of Floria. Though their recor was 3-8, the girls enjoye their season. This is what I taught them was the greatest joy of soccer.
The past three years of my life have given me greater visions of my future. I see the University of Michigan as holing a large book with many unrea chapters an myself as an eager chil who has just learne to rea. I inten to rea an probe into all the chapters.
The University of Michigan offers me more than the great reputation of this fine school, but a large stuent boy with iverse likes an islikes, an many activities, both acaemic an non-acaemic, to participate in. With the help of the University of Michigan, I will be successful after college an be able to make a name an place for myself in our society.