如何让自己的文书更有竞争力？

现在越来越多的小伙伴们选择出国留学，那么如何写出一个有竞争力的文书呢？今天侯老师就为大家一起分享一下。我们就根据段落来为大家分析吧~

首先，第一段，第一段根据外国老师的逻辑来看，第一段基本上都是背景阐述（backgroun），一般需要介绍一下自己出国的原因，可以是身边的朋友，老师或者家人的影响，也可以是因为专业领域的名人名校亦或者是因为一些书籍，电影等等~，当然了，也要简单的概述一下我们选择贵校的理由，这个方面可以说学校的知名度，校友或者专业方面。

我们来一起看一个例子~

The fast evelopment of Internet fuels the igital revolution an encourages acaemia an inustry to recognise that successful systems evelopment will greatly improve work efficiency an reuce cost. My unergrauate major is Material Forming an Control Engineering at Harbin Institute of Technology (HIT), China. The components we can esign are of significance to automobile manufacturing, transportation an aerospace inustry. The programme of MSc Mechanical Engineering at Imperial College Lonon allows stuents to evelop their abilities in subjects such as numerical analysis an signal processing, which are useful in all areas of mechanical engineering an are associate with the application of computers in engineering practice. Thus, this course will better prepare me for my future career by equipping me with skills an knowlege most-in-eman in toay’s society characterise by information technology. This explains why I am applying for the master egree in your prestigious university.

其次，在中间的段落我建议大家可以简述一下自己的本科经历，比如说所学的课程，所学的专业，在校的经历，自己对专业的理解等等，也可以表达一下自己为所学的专业付出过什么样的努力，如何提升自己等等，如果是有参加过实习或者是项目的小伙伴们也可以把自己的项目经历，或者实习经历写进去，但是一定要表述清楚，自己经过这次项目之后有什么样的提升~，如果是转专业的小伙伴们，一定要给出充分的转专业的理由哦~

我们在来看一个中间部分的例子~

In September 2015, I was fortunately amitte into Tongji University, majoring in Civil Engineering with the orientation of geotechnical engineering. I have learne a lot of curricula that relate to earth sciences like Tectonics, Petrology an Volcanology as well as Geophysics. So I have lai basic founation in my future stuy of earth science. Since commencement of my unergrauate program, I have become all the more stuious to acquire more knowlege of mathematics moeling, numerical analyzing, programming, etc., which has been applie to a practice an consoliate by the practice. In the secon semester of my junior year, the chance for the practice came when I was qualifie enough to enter a scientific an technological innovation project after passing the repeate screening an various examinations an tests. The project was about application of 3D igital image reconstruction technologies on rock excavation face to the construction of highway tunnels in western area.During the practice, combining with the geological conitions an rilling information in the tunnel construction site, I was mainly involve in utilizing igital image technology to set up the fine 3D igital moel of jointe rock mass in tunnel surrouning rocks an put forwar the rational an fast iscontinuous eformation analysis to analyze the stability of the surrouning rock of the tunnel. During this process, I emonstrate the soli mathematics founation, religious logic analyze capacity, an goo communication skills.This practice enowe me with rich experience in mathematical moeling an programming.

最后，在收尾段落里大家需要写一下自己的职业规划，比如说如果我们就读了研究生的话， 我们以后的发展方向是？再就业里的目标岗位是？也可以更细节一些，如三年规划，五年规划等等。当然了，也要说一下我们选择这个学校的理由，并表述一下自己对自己的期望~

最后我们再看一个结尾的例子~

I fully appreciate the motto of Lonon School of Economics an Political Science, To Unerstan the Cause of Things, which, from my point of view, is tightly in connection with my attitue towars acaemic stuy an life. Maintaining an extraorinarily intense passion for stuy, I am fon of tirelessly pursuing knowlege an conucting miscellaneous researches. Stuying in Lonon School of Economics an Political Science, I will enjoy a kin of iverse an free acaemic atmosphere, selecting the courses an professors I am particularly intereste in an arranging for my stuy all by myself. There is no oubt that such kin of regulations can enhance my inepenent ways of thinking, as well as problem-solving an communication capacity simultaneously. The Human Resource Management (HRM) stream of MSc Human Resource an Organisations offers abunant HR-relate career courses, among which I am particularly intereste in Human Resource Management Skills an Practitioner Speaker series, Human Rights in the Workplace an Rewar Systems: Key Moels an Practices. Therefore, I sincerely hope that you can take my application into favorable consieration.

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