美国华大圣路易斯、南加大LLM录取案例

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学生姓名：D同学

申请类型：研究生

教育经历

09/2016-06/2020 西南政法大学 法学专业 GPA 3.0/4.0

语言/标化考试成绩

IELTS 6.5

工作经历

无

实习经历

King & Woo MallesonsOnline

PTA (Part-time Assistant) 08/22/2020-09/21/2020

•Mainly responsible for writing an material analysis of business memo an business ue iligence report, an writing an revision of investment agreement;

•Got familiar with the operating mechanism an work process of a law firm;

•Learne the basic rules that lawyers shoul follow when hanling cases

Chongqing Exceeon & Partners Law Firm Chongqing, China

Lawyer Assistant07/06/2020-08/10/2020

•Mainly responsible for collecting an analyzing the relevant laws an regulations of the case, carrying out ocuments, as well as assisting in organizing files, bining files into volumes, etc. after the case is close

Chongqing Minge Commercial Factoring Co., Lt Chongqing, China

Trainee Legal Manager 04/10/2020-05/31/2020

•Mainly responsible for assisting with the review of business contracts, isposing the risk projects, an actively participating in business negotiations

Chongqing Liangjiang Financial Development Co., LTDChongqing, China

Trainee Project Manager07/15/2019-08/23/2019

•Performe ue iligence of investment projects an post-investment project management

PRUDENTIAL Hong Kong, China

Trainee 01/27/2019-02/02/2019

•Acquire general knowlege of insurance, unerstoo the basic insurance business, an analyze the ifferences between the insurance inustries in Mainlan China an Hong Kong;

•Stuie how to use the knowlege of civil law an commercial law in the insurance business to help corporate customers with risk control an plan optimization;

•Practice communicating an negotiating with others in an English business environment

Chongqing No. 3 Intermeiate People’s CourtChongqing, China

Law Clerk07/16/2018-09/21/2018

•Organize ocuments an files;

•Participate in case hearing an stuying

科研经历

无

奖项/证书

•Secon-Class Unergrauate Scholarship for Comprehensive Performance of SWUPL 05/2020

•Secon Prize in 2018 China College Stuents’ Entrepreneurship Competition 10/2018

PUBLICATIONS

1.Deng, Z. (2020, July 28). Significance of Civil Coe to Factoring Protection, Legality & Economy. 7, 59-61.

2.Zhang, H, Deng, Z. (2020, June 14). Does the Apology from Heytea Live up to Its Fans’ Affections? Shangyou News•Chongqing Morning Post. https://wap.cqcb.com/shangyou_news/NewsDetail?classI=4&newsI=2531508&staticUrl=https%3A%2F%2Ft.cqcb.com%2FHoC4

3.Zhang, H, Deng, Z. (2020, June 20). The Sales of One Live Webcast Exceeing 10 Billion, You May Never Copy Mingzhu Dong’s Success. Shangyou News•Chongqing Morning Post. https://wap.cqcb.com/shangyou_news/NewsDetail?classI=4&newsI=2566416&staticUrl=https%3A%2F%2Ft.cqcb.com%2FHjr0

4.Zhang, H, Deng, Z. (2020, June 26). He Is Still One Gene away from ‘the Brother Who Hacks a Way Through Brambles’. Shangyou News•Chongqing Morning Post. https://wap.cqcb.com/shangyou_news/NewsDetail?classI=4&newsI=2593538&staticUrl=https%3A%2F%2Ft.cqcb.com%2FHlm

申请结果

院校

专业

结果

Georgetown University

LLM

拒录

University of Southern California

LLM-Intl Business & Economic Law

录取

Boston University

LLM-Banking & Financial Law

录取

Washington University in St. Louis

LLM-General (one-year program)

录取

背景分析

学生优势：法学背景，有多项实习和发表文章

学生劣势：GPA偏低，语言成绩不高

文书思路

学生本身背景比较丰富，有多项在法院和律所的实习经历，也有亲人在法律系统工作，因此文书素材比较丰富。在选材料的时候主要挑选了和学生本人相关的、最能体现学生的学习兴趣、以及和他的未来职业目标相关的经历和案件。最终文书思路是从学生通过观看一个法制节目了解到的一个经济纠纷案件，通过探讨由于法律规定和伦理的冲突导致案件的复杂性，引出学生的一些疑问和对法律的兴趣，后面接着通过学生在本科就读期间的实习经历，介绍了另外两个案件，利用他接触的具体案件和分析，体现他在这方面的知识储备和批判性思维，以及如何在不断实习的过程中明确自己未来努力的方向，即成为一名法官。

申请总结

学生虽然绩点和语言成绩都不突出，但是实习经历比较丰富，也有自己专业方面的见解，通过各个文书从不同角度进行了展示，最终获得了不错的结果。