GPA2.8录取南加州大学经济学硕士

申请类型

研究生

教育经历

09/2013-07/2017 山西大学 信息管理与信息系统（主修）经济学（辅修） 本科 2.8/4.0

语言/标化考试成绩

toefl: 105 gre:315+3

工作经历

shanghai tonga venture capital co., lt.,shanghai 07/2017-present

investment assistant,investment evelopment ivision

² mainly conuct research on the inustry an liste company;

² participate in ue iligence of investment projects an assist in completing ue iligence reports;

² complete the financial moel construction, valuation an investment return analysis of the propose investment project;

² keep close communication with key companies to keep abreast of the latest inustry trens.

实习经历

gf securities co., lt., linyi 07/2015-08/2015

intern

² responsible for the evelopment of banking channels an other market channels, pai attention to the evelopment of financial proucts;

² provie clients with asset allocation avice an other basic services base on their investment preferences an risk tolerance;

² liaise an communicate with customers, maintain customer relationships;

² planne, organize an implemente marketing activities in the responsible region.

科研经历

1. research onavertising wor biing on the internet09/2016-05/2017

inepenent researcher

² use marginal revenue an marginal cost analysis metho s to complete my grauation thesis entitle online key wors avertising biing strategy.

1. chinese commoity price spillover network structure an ynamic interaction07/2016-08/2016

research assistant

² collecte price ata for ifferent commoity classes an calculate sample ata accoringly;

² learne relevant mathematical knowlege an assiste in econometric analysis;

² assiste groupmembers to chart the analysis results to complete the writing of the paper;

² participate in the meeting an iscussion, summarize the research results an forme the final conclusion.

1. research onfinancing ifficulties an countermeasures of small an micro science an technology enterprises in shanxi province 09/2015-06/2016

team leaer

² coorinate team members’job uties, an controlle the overall work progress;

² le the team to analyze the collecte ata an iscuss the economic characteristics;

² publishe a paper as the first author in a journal, u.s.-china cultural comment.

1. some personal insights into the “neeham thesis”03/2016-06/2016

inepenent researcher

² reviewe literature an watche relevant ocumentaries to analyze the “neeham thesis” from the perspectives of chinese scientific thought, feual social system an economics;

² inepenently complete an article entitle some personal insights into the “neeham thesis”.

奖项/证书

1. outstaning awar of the 7th “innovation challenge cup” business plan competition of shanxi university 05/2016

2. the thir prize in central china of the 18th ‘fltrp • j.com cup’ national english ebating competition 03/2015

3. merit stuent of shanxi university in 2014 06/2014

4. the secon prize of “outstaning stuent scholarship” of shanxi university 04/2014

5. the thir prize in the first shanxi university stuent international trae commoity exhibition 04/2014

6. the best ebater in “epc ebate competition” of the secon shanxi provincial epartment of lan an resources 04/2014

申请结果

院校

专业

结果

university of michigan-ann arbor

masters of applie economics

拒录

university of california, los angeles

master of applie economics

waitlist

university of illinois at urbana-champaign

ms in policy economics

拒录

northeastern university

ms in commerce an economic evelopment

录取

george washington university

ma in applie economics

拒录

university of southern california

master of science in applie economics an econometrics

录取

georgia institute of technology

ms in economics

拒录

boston university

ma in economics

拒录

georgetown university

masters egree in applie economics

拒录

背景分析

学生优势： 双专业，托福分数，以及工作和科研等软件背景。

学生劣势： gpa偏低，经济学先修课程不足。

文书思路

sop

开头：开门见山交代自己目前在创业投资公司任职，参与了多个投资项目的尽职调查积累了很多宝贵的行业经验。同时意识到，要想在目前的工作中取得更大的突破，还需要更多的专业知识。结合自己的职业目标说明了解过申请项目后觉得很适合我。

主体：详述背景优势。工作中讲述了一个做的最成功的也最具含金量的项目，从而专业知识的提升和综合能力的磨练。本科学习中积累的理论知识，以及在做毕业论文时自学了缺乏的先修课程。此外，表述信息管理和信息系统专业学习的计算机知识将使我能够更好地利用软件工具进行经济学研究。科研背景写了发表过论文的一个科研培训项目和跟着校外教授参加的一个关于商品价格的研究项目。

结尾：重申向学校展示出色的表现的信心。

ps

开头引用胡祖六先生在一次采访中的观点，中国经济体制有两个弱点：一是环境问题（污染问题、能源问题等）；二是金融问题。引出自己学习经济学的兴趣和经济学于社会发展的重要意义。接下来从经济学的角度分析了一下国内房地产行业过热的原因和问题。最后自己希望参与到中国金融市场的改革中。

申请总结

对于硬件条件不足的，比如先修课程这块，还是要想办法在文书中圆回来。另外，这个学生我们后来也有给每个学校发gpa解释信，将学生塑造成一个虽然gpa不理想但是自己是一个有想法有目标且一直在努力的形象。ucla wait后也第一时间给学校发了love letter，更新工作上的新成就和行业新认知。

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